you and a friend have both been accepted to a study abroad program in Paris, France. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Congratulate him/her for also being accepted Ask him/her if he/she would like to be your roommate Discuss possible activities that the two of you could do together Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ___,

#friend #study #program #paris #france #roommate #activities #two #addresses #___

Dear Annie, I Hope everything is well with you! It has been a

while

since the

last

time I spoke to you, how is your family?First of all my best wishes for you being selected for of Paris education program and I am so thrilled to hear that you reached your goal. Since I was

also

been selected for the same college,I am planning to stay in the outskirts of Paris and It will take roughly around 30 minutes to reach to college by bus.Past few days I have been looking for various accommodations and I found a room in a modern apartment with all the amenities.I just want to ask if you still have not found any accommodation you are more than welcome to share the room with me.If you are interested please let me know in advance. I hope you remember we used to play cricket when we were kids, the good news is the playground is located next to our apartment and I believe we can spend some quality time there. Hope to hear back from you soon and I will see you very soon. Your loving friend Sam

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