In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
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increasing
. So question about how to allocate Wrong verb form
increases
place
for building new buildings are very important nowadays. Add an article
a place
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of Add a hyphen
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people
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the people
are
agree to build houses in the Unnecessary verb
apply
countryside
. Another one Use synonyms
think
that it is necessary to protect the Change the verb form
thinks
countryside
and refuse Use synonyms
from
new building there.
In my opinion, it is important to protect Change preposition
apply
environment
and Correct article usage
the environment
nature
of Correct article usage
the nature
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countryside
in how it is, because there are a lot of rare species of animals and plants. Correct article usage
the countryside
Also
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countrysides
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countryside
it
is Correct pronoun usage
apply
source
of raw materials and food for big cities.
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the source
a source
From
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On
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the other
other hand
, every year population of cities are increasing and there become more and more offers for Change the wording
another hand
other hands
room
. But because of lack of free place for new buildings. The prices are increasing and Add an article
the room
a room
due to
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number of homeless Linking Words
people
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are
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is
also
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discussing Correct article usage
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this
question they will be able to find the solution. Linking Words
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a building
building
where will be no or minimum harm Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
for
nature. Change preposition
to
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they can rebuild old low-rise homes Add a comma
,Also
to
bigger ones and so on.
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into
countryside
. But it is Use synonyms
also
important not to forget about Linking Words
people
who need Use synonyms
home
. So Add an article
a home
government
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the government
have
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taken
this
question and with help of scientists and other smart Linking Words
people
find the solutionUse synonyms
,
because it is always possible to find Remove the comma
apply
the
solution which won’t have bad consequences for both Correct article usage
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and nature.Use synonyms
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