In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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. So question about how to allocate

place

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for building new buildings are very important nowadays.

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of

people

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are

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agree to build houses in the

countryside

. Another one

think

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that it is necessary to protect the

countryside

and refuse

from

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new building there. In my opinion, it is important to protect

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the environment

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and

nature

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the nature

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of

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the countryside

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in how it is, because there are a lot of rare species of animals and plants.

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countrysides

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countryside

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is

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of raw materials and food for big cities.

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, every year population of cities are increasing and there become more and more offers for

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the room

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. But because of lack of free place for new buildings. The prices are increasing and

due to

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number of homeless

people

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also

increasing.

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sure that there are many ways of solving

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problem. Fortunately,

people

are smart and after

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discussing

this

question they will be able to find the solution.

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a building

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building

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buildings

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where will be no or minimum harm

for

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nature.

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they can rebuild old low-rise homes

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bigger ones and so on. To sum it up, I want to say that it is necessary to prioritize the protection of the

countryside

. But it is

also

important not to forget about

people

who need

home

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a home

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. So

government

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the government

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have

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take

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under control

this

question and with help of scientists and other smart

people

find the solution

,

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because it is always possible to find

the

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solution which won’t have bad consequences for both

people

and nature.