The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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meals
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Dinner account
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accounts
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the intake of sodium, with a Change preposition
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proportion
of 43%. Breakfast and snacks
have similar
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patterns
this
kind of nutrient, as both are 14%. Lunch makes the rest the part of the whole typical meals
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, with a percentage of 37%, the largest part of saturated fat intaking
happens in dinner, but not far more than the Replace the word
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proportion
of lunch and snacks
, which are 21% and 26% respectively.
However
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sugar
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different pattern in the Change the article
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meals
--42% in snacks
, which far
more than the Add a missing verb
is far
proportion
of other kinds of meals
. Meanwhile, the percentage of other meals
are relatively close to each other.
In summary, people eat the most added sugar in their snacks
, and saturated fat is relatively average in different kind
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kinds
meals
. Moreover
, dinner is obviously the most important meal as it has the biggest or second-beiggest
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proportion
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nutrients.Correct article usage
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