Men are placed in the most high-level jobs. some people say that the government should encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, it is common for every man
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the most of high-level
jobs
. It is believed that certain head positions in some companies
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the male gender,
otherwise
of giving opportunities to
women
. In my opinion, I do not agree with
this
opinion, I believe
women
should be given the same opportunities to have equal responsibility.
This
essay will explain both perspectives of views. On one hand, some people think there are specific
jobs
that may not be suitable for a high-level career woman. They think that
women
are not physically and mentally strong enough to carry out stressful tasks.
For example
, high-level administrative
jobs
in the
government
or private sector involve a lot of stress.
Moreover
, withholding some
jobs
will create gender discrimination in opportunities. Some people who are
best
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suitable for the job have to be rejected
due to
such
reservations
Furthermore
, the
government
as the regulator can be the third party to issue some regulations,
For
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issuing flexible working hours rules for some career
women
who work in some companies in the state, or giving them the opportunity
for working
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from home to maintain relationships with their kids or family. By issuing
this
regulation, it will encourage them, there is a gateway for
women
to build their careers and become role models in society. The
government
should
also
introduce new policies to save
women
from discrimination and allocate funds to provide higher education and employment. In conclusion, I believe not only men can do mostly specific
jobs
at a high level, but
also
women
can be the party which contributes to
this
responsibility.
However
, the
government
should be the party to create the environment for both parties.
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