the diagram below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevnt.
The figures illustrate the lifespan of fast flowing
salmon
, which is Use synonyms
the
one kind of big fish.
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Overall
, Linking Words
salmon
's life cycle has three main stages. It begins in the upper Use synonyms
river
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then
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lower
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the lower
river
and Use synonyms
finally
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open
sea. they live ten years during those stages.
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the open
Salmon
eggs are located in the upper Use synonyms
river
below reeds and beside small stones. The Use synonyms
salmon
babies, which are called fry, have to live there Use synonyms
five
to six months and their length is going to be 3-8 cm. After that, when they grow up about 12 to 15 cm and become smolt, they go Change preposition
for five
to
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too
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a
river
and spend four years of their life on that.
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salmon
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a length
the length
length
of 70 to 76 cm, live the Fix the agreement mistake
lengths
last
five of their lives in Linking Words
open
sea. Add an article
the open
Finally
, adult Linking Words
salmon
go to the upper Use synonyms
river
to put their eggs in the bottom of the reeds.Use synonyms
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salmon, river with synonyms.
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