Write a letter to the manager of the Lost and Found department of the railway regarding the luggage you accidentally left on the train. In your letter: •Give the details of your train trip •Describe the luggage you left on the train •Say what actions you want him/her to take

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am Arun and I was a passenger on the

vaigai

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viagra

express train

Chennai

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from Chennai

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to Madurai on 27 March. My purpose

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writing

the

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letter about

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luggage I

had

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accidentally left on the train during my travelling. I

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started my travel from Chennai station at 5.00 clock in the early morning on

13rd

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July to Dindigul on the same day. My seat number is 13D Sleeper coach D3 near to window at

entrance

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about my missing luggage.

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about 15 kg black

color

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American

tourister

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trolley

bag

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. The

bag

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slightly

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dented in the top portion and

some

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scratches in the

bag

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and fully wrapped. The suitcase fully contains my

cloths

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and my books It should be

the

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valuable help to contact the lost and found department to check my

bag

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the next station or

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the train I am looking forward

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fast response from you Yours faithfully

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

155 words

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Write a letter to the manager of the Lost and Found department of the railway regarding the luggage you accidentally left on the train. In your letter: •Give the details of your train trip •Describe the luggage you left on the train •Say what actions you want him/her to take

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?

Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give you own opinion.

Some people believe that countries should produce the food to feed their population themselves and import as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it should be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?