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Write a letter to the manager of the Lost and Found department of the railway regarding the luggage you accidentally left on the train. In your letter: •Give the details of your train trip •Describe the luggage you left on the train •Say what actions you want him/her to take

#manager #lost #department #railway #luggage #train #•give #trip #•describe #•say #actions
Dear Sir/Madam, I am Arun and I was a passenger on the
vaigai
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viagra
 express train
Chennai
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from Chennai
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 to Madurai on 27 March. My purpose
to
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 writing
the
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 letter about
my
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 luggage I
had
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accidentally left on the train during my travelling. I
had
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started my travel from Chennai station at 5.00 clock in the early morning on
13rd
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 July to Dindigul on the same day. My seat number is 13D Sleeper coach D3 near to window at
entrance
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.
Secondly
 about my missing luggage.
Its
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 about 15 kg black
color
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colour
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 American
tourister
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Tourister
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 trolley
bag
. The
bag
slightly
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is slightly
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 dented in the top portion and
some
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has some
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 scratches in the
bag
 and fully wrapped. The suitcase fully contains my
cloths
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clothes
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 and my books It should be
the
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valuable help to contact the lost and found department to check my
bag
in
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at
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 the next station or
in
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on
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 the train I am looking forward
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to the
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the
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a
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 fast response from you Yours faithfully
kumar
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Kumar
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Submitted by arunramrvs on

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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