The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart
depict
the normal Change the verb form
depicts
household
spending Use synonyms
is
in Unnecessary verb
apply
Japan
in Use synonyms
Malaysia
in the year 2010
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Overall
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Japan
chart clearly shows that Change noun form
Japan's
have
of their total Correct your spelling
half
house
expenditures were made by housing and other goods and services Replace the word
housing
where
in Correct word choice
whereas
Malaysia
the highest proportion is housing
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Use synonyms
Malaysia
slowest percentages of Change noun form
Malaysia's
household
spending our healthcare and transport with 30% and 10% respectively Use synonyms
where as
in Correct your spelling
whereas
Japan
these ratios exactly double 6% for housing and 20% for transport
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On the other
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hand
the remaining three types Add a comma
,hand
healthcare
and food and other goods and services were approximately the same in each country except for healthcare it took Change preposition
of healthcare
the
first place in Correct article usage
apply
Malaysia
for spendings Use synonyms
by
34% Change preposition
with
however
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this
percentage drops by 13% in Linking Words
Japan
achieving 21% of total Use synonyms
household
expenses Use synonyms
also
taken the third place.
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To sum up
we could say that relevantly three types of Linking Words
household
expenditure were relatively same in both countries which are food and other goods and services and housingUse synonyms
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words household, japan, malaysia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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