You use the local swimming pool often, and during one of your visits, you encountered a problem. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter describe what the problem was. tell what the swimming pool staff have done about it. suggest your own solution to the problem.

Dear

Mr.

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Smith, I am writing to complain about an issue with the swimming

pool

. As a loyal member of your company, I really enjoyed using your facilities.

However

, I found that the

water

temperature in the swimming

pool

is extremely low at some moments. Since the

pool

is built inside the building, the quality of

water

should be carefully maintained and it should not be too hot or too cold. Swimmers can feel scared if they swim in

water

that has less than 12 degrees. I knew that you used air conditioning devices to control the temperature of the room and the

pool

.

However

,

this

plan does not function well, since air has significantly greater heat conductivity than

water

does.

In other words

, it is much easier to warm up air than

water

.

While

these devices can make people in the room feel comfortable,

it

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can hardly heat or cool the fluid inside the swimming

pool

.

Hence

, I recommend that you should insert pipes that can hold

water

with different temperatures into the swimming

pool

since it allows you to adjust the temperature in the

pool

rapidly. When customers feel too cold in the swimming

pool

, you can add hot

water

inside it through tubes, and vice versa. Please inform me

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way that you would like to resolve

this

problem within 7 days.

Otherwise

, I will cancel my membership. Yours Sincerely,