You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter, •give details of your course and your arrival/departure date • explain your accommodation needs • ask for information about getting to and from the college

Dear Sir My name is Prabhsimranjot kaur. I am starting
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course in May. I have to go
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river college for
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course. I am writing to inform you that
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am coming to Winnipeg for 2 months. My training starts
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and ends in August. I need accommodation for 2 months and could you please help me to find out
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apartment or basement near to
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. I just need accommodation where good
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. Could you
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find accommodation where good bus services so that
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can easily go to college and come back
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I look forward to your rapid response. best regards, Prabhsimranjot
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