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The line chart shows trends in terms of employment in the USA in millions and predictions for the future.

The line chart shows trends in terms of employment in the USA in millions and predictions for the future.
#line #trends #terms #employment #usa #millions #predictions #future
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This
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 line chart demonstrates the
employment
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 trends in the USA presented through a
million
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 figure.
Overall
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, the
trend
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 of manufacturing widely fluctuates
on the other hand
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 There is a positive
trend
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of
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in
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 services and
agriculture
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,
in contrast
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 to that in
agriculture
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.The highest number of
employment
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 belonged to
agriculture
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 with 80
million
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employment
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while
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 the other two at approximately ten
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In contrast
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 to the positive
trend
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 of manufacturing and services in the first four years period. the number of
agriculture
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employment
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 dropped significantly and get surpassed by services at roughly 40
million
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,There is
also
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 a reverse of the manufacturing
trend
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 in the same years After the intersection occurred all types of jobs stay on the same
trend
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 and there is a prediction that the
trend
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 will continue for over 43years.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast".
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words employment, million, trend, agriculture with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "trends" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 7 times.
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