The line chart shows trends in terms of employment in the USA in millions and predictions for the future.
This
line chart demonstrates the employment
trends in the USA presented through a million
figure. Overall
, the trend
of manufacturing widely fluctuates on the other hand
There is a positive trend
of
services and Change preposition
in
agriculture
, in contrast
to that in agriculture
.The highest number of employment
belonged to agriculture
with 80 million
employment
while
the other two at approximately ten million
In contrast
to the positive trend
of manufacturing and services in the first four years period. the number of agriculture
employment
dropped significantly and get surpassed by services at roughly 40 million
,There is also
a reverse of the manufacturing trend
in the same years After the intersection occurred all types of jobs stay on the same trend
and there is a prediction that the trend
will continue for over 43years.Submitted by Maxxxx0129 on
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