The pie charts compare how much the proportions of three fast-food outlets are favoured by teenagers in Vietnam and Indonesia in 2017 with projections for 2027.
The assigned circular chart expounds
the
information about the three fast-food categories and Correct article usage
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shoes
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shows
how
much youngsters Correct word choice
and how
are
liked Unnecessary verb
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this outlets items
in Vietnam and Indonesia Change the determiner
this outlets item
these outlets items
in
between 2017 and 2027. Change preposition
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Overall
, it is clear that
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McDonald's
McDonald is
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McDonald's
most
popular outlet in both countries Add an article
a most
the most
upto
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up to
future
year Correct article usage
the future
also
. Whereas
, other outlets had different proportion trends that are liked fluctuating
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To commence with, it is clear from Wrong verb form
fluctuated
details
that in Vietnam, Burger King had Correct article usage
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highest
proportion in 2017 ,about Change the article
the highest
of
52%,having a downfall of 13% in upcoming years. In the contrast, kfc had Change preposition
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lowest
ratio of popularity in 2017(4.1%). Change the article
the lowest
Which
is projected that it will Correct pronoun usage
It
rised
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rise
raised
around
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by around
of
2% in the future.
Probing Change preposition
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further
, in Indonesia, the fraction was noticed at 23% in the beginning year, which is KFC but it is predicted as, the ratio will be inclined upto
2027 and 15% was Correct your spelling
up to
percentage
of Burger King,where Add an article
the percentage
a percentage
fraction
goes downward about Correct article usage
the fraction
of
one-third. Change preposition
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In addition
, teenagers are preferred to eat McDonald
items more as compared to other outlets.Change noun form
McDonald's
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