The bar chart showed the percentage of school children learning to play four different musical instruments (violin, guitar, piano, drums) in 2005, 2010, 2015.

The given chart illustrates the proportion of

students

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who played 4 types of musical instruments namely:

guitar

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, piano, drums and violin for a 10-year period. In general, the percentage of

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who played the

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and the piano grew up steadily,

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these figures for other instruments fluctuated

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. Looking at the graph for more detail, the

guitar

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was played by more than 10% of

students

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in 2005 and increased rapidly to reach 20% in 2010. In 2015, the percentage of

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who were

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reach a peak of around 27% of the total

children

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.

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figure for the piano was followed up

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figure for the

guitar

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, from approximately 10% in 2005 to

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to 25% in the next 10 years.

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, the proportion of children who played the drums remained unchanged

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6% from 2005 to 2010, and increase slightly to almost 8% in 2015.

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,

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figure for the violin was stay stable at 7% in the first 5-year period and decreased minimally to 6% in 2015.