The line graph gives the percentage of tourist`s visits for England art galleries,pavilions,piers and festivals in Brighton.
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The line graph gives the percentage of
tourist`s
visits Fix the agreement mistake
tourists'
for
England Change preposition
to
art
galleries,pavilions,piers and festivals in Brighton.
Overall
,it shows a general steadiness until a sudden plateau in pavilion
and Add an article
the pavilion
art
gallery
in the last
years. Both pier and festival remained stable trend along the period.
Case
of Correct article usage
The case
art
gallery
and pavilion
tended to go up,although
they were abrupt
levelling out in both.By 1995 Change the word
abruptly
pavilion
attraction had reached its highest peak for
50%
and Change preposition
of
art
gallery
in 1985 for fourty
Correct your spelling
forty
four
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
Then
they showed remarkable steadiness despite touring to art
Correct article usage
an art
gallery
gradually Fix the agreement mistake
galleries
decreased
in 2010 .
Wrong verb form
decreasing
In contrast
,art
Correct article usage
the art
gallery
commenced Fix the agreement mistake
galleries
its
steadiness in 1990 and Correct pronoun usage
their
pavilion
in 2000 with the rate of Correct article usage
the pavilion
art
gallery
visits being generally higher.
The proportin
of Correct your spelling
proportion
festival
was loftier than Add an article
the festival
pier
.In spite of that, Add an article
the pier
pier
had slight fluctuations over the period and significantly soared to twenty Add an article
the pier
percent
in 2010.
Meanwhile,Change the spelling
per cent
festival`s
tendency stayed on Correct article usage
the festival`s
stayed on
static.Remove the redundancy
apply
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