You recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived it was unusable. Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the drummer I recently purchased from your website.
I am Jennifer Ramos, I have been a premier member of your online store for
last
six years. Correct article usage
the last
Last
week I have
ordered a drimmer on your Black Friday sale and it Unnecessary verb
apply
arrives
on Monday afternoon. My order ID is A123456.
Wrong verb form
arrived
While
unboxing the item I noticed that the package was not properly sealed, Moreover
the Add a comma
,Moreover
product
I chose was different from the delivered product
. Furthermore
, I have chosen black colour however
it was delivered in red colour.
As the product
is substandard and does not meet my expectation
, Fix the agreement mistake
expectations
therefore
, I am requesting you to refund my full amount which is 150 dollars. Please arrange to collect back the product
as soon as possible.
This
my first bad experience from your store. I am expecting more professional service for your delivery quality checking process.
I look forward to hearing from Correct your spelling
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yoou
,
Yours faithfully,
Jennifer RamosCorrect your spelling
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.