You recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived it was unusable. Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the drummer I recently purchased from your website. I am Jennifer Ramos, I have been a premier member of your online store for

last

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the last

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six years.

Last

week I

have

Unnecessary verb

apply

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ordered a drimmer on your Black Friday sale and it

arrives

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arrived

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on Monday afternoon. My order ID is A123456.

While

unboxing the item I noticed that the package was not properly sealed,

Moreover

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the

product

I chose was different from the delivered

product

Furthermore

, I have chosen black colour

however

it was delivered in red colour. As the

product

is substandard and does not meet my

expectation

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therefore

, I am requesting you to refund my full amount which is 150 dollars. Please arrange to collect back the

product

as soon as possible.

This

my first bad experience from your store. I am expecting more professional service for your delivery quality checking process. I look forward to hearing from

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you

yoou

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you

, Yours faithfully, Jennifer Ramos

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Linking words
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1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

165 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

order number
shipment
delivery
damaged
defective
package
request
replacement
refund
customer support
awaiting your prompt response
solution
photos attached
upon inspection
apologies in advance

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Structure your letter

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