The diagram shows a method of shaping glass containers.
This
flow graph shows the procedure to shape the glass
containers.
Overall
, the whole flow includes nine steps in total, starting at the stage of the glass
melting and the final step is to sort the good glass
and pack it.
Firstly
, the glass
should be put into the fire oven with 105-celsius heating. Then
, the hot glass
in mould 1 would be pressed and shaped to be a container which has a thick wall in the
mould 2. Followed by the steps mentioned, some air must be blown into Correct article usage
apply
this
thick container.
Turning to the next two important steps, it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
focus
on heating and cooling. The Correct subject-verb agreement
focuses
glass
needs a
second-time heating at a high Celsus in the Remove the article
apply
kilin
space, with over 480 Celsus. Correct your spelling
kiln
killing
Next,
turn the temperature down to 25 Celsus with the purpose to cool it for one hour. The eighth step is to check the quality of the finished glass
one by one in person. The final stage is to divide the glass
into good and bad types, packing the good and throwing the bad to waste
box.Correct article usage
the waste
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