Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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some

people

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think that dangerous

sports

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should be banned by

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the goverment

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goverment

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government

, others think that

everyone

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should have

freedom

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the freedom

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to do any

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sports

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or activity. My take on

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is that freedom is the most important thing that

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everyone

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of us

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, and

people

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should make a decision on their own, to do dangerous

sports

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or not. The first point is that

everyone

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has their own passions, and

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a right to do anything he wants, until it becomes dangerous to others. As we know, there

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an awful lot of different dangerous

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of

sports

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, which are presented

on

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Olympic

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the Olympic

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games.

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, freestyle skiing is one of the most spectacular

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, with lots of tournaments and

proffesionals

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professionals

in it. So why we should prevent

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from doing it, if it's their passion, and they do it for living

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The other point is that

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kinds

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can be harmful not only for

people

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who do it

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but

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for

people

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who are just close to the place of action.

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example

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there are a lot of street skaters, who are doing tricks in public places,

where

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there

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are lots of cars and pedestrians.

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the

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fact, they can do damage to them by accident. The problem is quite

whide-spread

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wide-spread

and can be solved just by providing them

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place to do their activity, where they can't be dangerous to other. To sum it up, I don't think that it's

a

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right decision just to put a ban on dangerous

sports

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, because it is a big opportunity

to

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for

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everyone

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to try

themselfs

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themselves

in a

proffesional

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professional

sport, and

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it can be a great hobby

to

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everyone

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. But the main point is that

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it should be safe for others.