In some areas of world people love to live in traditional lifestyle while in other regions they have a modern living standard. Why it happens? Discuss both views for supporting of your topic.

As a result
of the impact of technology on our lives, we are shifting to a modern lifestyle.
On the other hand
, a part of the population is rejecting
this
change and is anchored to the tradition. In the essay, I will try to give some examples and
then
discuss the reason for the origin of
this
phenomenon. Commercial metropolia and cities with high tourism are places where the modern lifestyle is very common. The factors that are causing
this
transformation in the behaviour are the contact with imported traditions and the advance in technology. People are continuously exposed to new stimuli that can have a huge impact on the way they live. Traditions,
in contrast
, are more likely to remain in rural areas or underdeveloped cities where is rare to spot visitors.
This
is
due to
the fact
that is
uncommon to mix their costumes with those of other cultures. Italy offers a good example of
this
trend. The north of the country, especially the big cities like Milan,
are
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slowly living in a more globalized manner. The south,
in particular
the small towns, is still very attached to the tradition. In my opinion,
the
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traditions are fascinating and we must preserve them but
this
doesn't mean that we should avoid
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cultural exchange at all costs. In fact, we could benefit from contact with other costumes.
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