Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

In the modern era, the concept of learning
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the most important and learning local languages is not a must-need increasingly widespread among parents and millennials. Personally,
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and it is important for us to learn
English
. On the one hand, learning
English
help us to communicate with people from different countries.
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research from Oxford in 2020,
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became the most people learned language in the world. Knowing how to speak
English
encourage us to talk to others because we can easily chat with each other.
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up communication with people can increase our confidence so we can face challenges in a positive way. It helps us to solve our difficulties in daily life. Take
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as an example, I met some friends from Japan and Korea by using
English
to talk together and we become
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friend
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. We help
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each other and I feel really positive
everday
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every day
I wake up.
On the other hand
, learning
English
train our brain to absorb new
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.
English
appear
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everywhere
such
as on public transport, in
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and on social media. We can absorb various vocabulary in
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lives.
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our mind to accept new items and hell passion when we are studying. It is hard to look at books
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but we can receive lots of vocabulary from films and shows. It is an easier way to train our
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in the city.
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us to develop more way.
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but not least, local languages are
also
important to us. We can know many
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of our country so it is important to study both languages for teenagers.
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  • economic opportunities
  • cultural diversity
  • endangered
  • linguistic heritage
  • inclusive
  • multilingualism
  • language revitalization
  • language policy
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