The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate student who did not

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate student who did not
The two bar charts give information on the four common steps that undergraduate and postgraduate
students
in the UK take
besides
a full-time job after completing their studies in 2008.
Overall
, the majority of undergraduate and postgraduate
students
chose to continue their studies at a higher level,
while
only a small proportion of them opt for engaging in voluntary activities. Of undergraduate
students
, nearly 30,000 of them decided to pursue
further
study, followed by 17,735 graduates who wanted to get a part-time job. Interestingly, 15,235 graduates chose to take a break and only 3500 graduates wanted to volunteer during their spare time.
Similarly
, a large proportion of postgraduates wanted to pursue higher education with 2725
students
going for
this
option.
Additionally
, 2535
students
chose to get a part-time job and 1625
students
decided to do nothing. Similar to undergraduate
students
, less than 345 of them wanted to get involved in voluntary work.
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