The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate student who did not

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate student who did not
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The two bar charts give information on the four common steps that undergraduate and postgraduate
students
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in the UK take
besides
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a full-time job after completing their studies in 2008.
Overall
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, the majority of undergraduate and postgraduate
students
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chose to continue their studies at a higher level,
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only a small proportion of them opt for engaging in voluntary activities. Of undergraduate
students
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, nearly 30,000 of them decided to pursue
further
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study, followed by 17,735 graduates who wanted to get a part-time job. Interestingly, 15,235 graduates chose to take a break and only 3500 graduates wanted to volunteer during their spare time.
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, a large proportion of postgraduates wanted to pursue higher education with 2725
students
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going for
this
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option.
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, 2535
students
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chose to get a part-time job and 1625
students
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decided to do nothing. Similar to undergraduate
students
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, less than 345 of them wanted to get involved in voluntary work.
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