The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2040 and 2060. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given pie charts illustrate global projected

production

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percentages by different areas in 2040 and 2060.

For instance

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, Services, Energy,Agriculture, Manufacturing, Agriculture, Materials, and Info-Com Tech are different examples of

production

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sectors.

Overall

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, both pie charts are quite similar to each other

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percentages.

Services

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The services

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sector would be dominated other sectors in 2040 and 2060, %40 and %41 respectively. Cultivation would be decreased to %1 in 2060 and would be the least

production

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interest

besides

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other areas. The second major field is Manufacturing with

estimated

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an estimated

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31% and 33% respectively in 2040 and 2060.

Service

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The service

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sector, in 2040, would have %

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a 31

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production

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rate, after 20 years

this

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rate slightly increased to %33.

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Energy

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the Energy

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field

have

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has

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a tendency

for

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fall by 2% between 2040 and 2060. Another field that

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follows

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this

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trend is Agriculture.

Cultivation

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The cultivation

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sector would be decreased to %1 from %4 in 2 decades. Materials and Info-Com Technologies would be slightly improved their

production

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by %1.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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158 words

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