vou want to complain about the service you received in the hotel you stayed in while attending a recent meeting. Write a letter to the person who organised the meeting. In your letter • • • describe the meeting explain the problems with the service suggest what the meeting organiser should do.
Dear Thomson,
I am John, HR of Maxbuzz company, situated at Pine Street opposite Grand Park. I am writing to you to express my dissatisfaction with the services received by your hotel on 27 March 2023.
First of all, I am your regular customer and booked a hall a month ago and mention everything that I want and made all the payments in advance. The organiser of the meeting promise me that he provides all the services to my foreign investors, but he was not fulfilled his promise.
Moving on, on the date 27 March when we were all in the conference room and discussing the project, suddenly the electricity supply was stopped
due to
that we are unable to continue. Moreover
, my guests also
suffer a lot because the elevator does not work properly which results in a waste of time.
Finally
, I recommend you please trained your staff properly. Also
, check all the equipment and supply in advance so that your customers do not suffer. I hope perhaps my suggestion would help you.
Yours Sincerely,
JohnSubmitted by parvinderp93 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite