The pie charts below show the coffee production, coffee consumption and the profit distribution around the world
The three charts depict
coffee
production, coffee
consumption, and profit
distribution
around the globe.
South Africa produces the most significant coffee
in the world with a percentage of 41%. In the second position is Indonesia making up around 22% globally. The rest
counties given such
as Japan and Vietnam produce under 20%.
For coffee
consumption, Europe consumes slightly much more than America with differences average of 2% . Japan drinks coffee
moderately less than the rest
of the world. Moreover
, the rest
of the countries use coffee
just over 10 per cent.
Looking at the details in profit
distribution
, coffee
delivery is the most significant income for distribution
around the globe which is more than half of the rest
. Moreover
, retailers relatively contribute profit
to 24%, meanwhile, producers considerably earn 15 per cent. However
, Export still gives under 10% of profit
in coffee
distribution
.
Overall
, South Africa and Asia massively generate coffee
for global distribution
, and western countries such
as Europe and America are the biggest market for coffee
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