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Some people think they have the right to use as much fresh water as they want, but others believe government should control the use of freshwater as it is a limited resource. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is believed by some people that people should be free with respect to reaching freshwater
sources
while
 others assert that these
sources
 should be in control by
government
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the government
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due to
 their limits. Freedom
in
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of
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 accessing freshwater may be beneficial for individuals’
health
. Looking
to
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this
 case from the other side,
water
sources
 are not limitless and it may lead to draughts in some regions. On the one hand, freedom in
accessibility
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the accessibility
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 of fresh
water
 may increase societies’
health
 quality. Many populated regions have been suffering
due to
use
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the use
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 of
water
 limitations and
this
 action would change their status. They can
use
 fresh
water
 in drink, washing foods and showering and they have given up consuming bottled
waters
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water
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 to maintain their
health
 and
thus
, they can preserve their money.
Additionally
, they may
use
water
 in their gardens to obtain more healthy groceries and fruits.
Hence
, they would get some profits in terms of
health
 and funds.
On the other hand
,
government
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the government
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 ought to control in
distributing
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distribution
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 of freshwater
sources
due to
 their limited amount.
Although
 some restrictions have happened in terms of using
of
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water
 supplies and they seem not fair for consumers, these actions would bring some profit in sustainability
accessing
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 in long term.
For example
, without these restrictions, some people may
use
sources
 unnecessarily and
government
 may not distribute supplies in critical durations
such
 as springs and summers.
In addition
, limitless distribution may damage
water
 infrastructures and
likelihood
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the likelihood
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 of
water
 cuts may increase.
Therefore
,
ruling
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the ruling
a ruling
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of
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on
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 these
sources
 may be beneficial for permanent
use
. In conclusion, causes and examples can be multiplied with
this
 discussion. Even though
,
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free
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the free
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 using these
sources
 have some considerable positive impact
for
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 individuals’ situations, in my opinion,
sources
 should be managed by
government
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the government
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 owing to
its
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their
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long term
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long-term
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