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Some people say that soon we will never again have to learn a foreign language because computers will be able to translate all languages into English. What are the advantages and disadvantages of computers being able to do this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is a common belief that some
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 reckon that
people
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 do not need to learn a second
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 since they can
use
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 computers which will be able to translate all
languages
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English
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, there is a more persuasive argument that using a
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people
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 because sometimes, a
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 does not work. On the one hand, some
people
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 think that
people
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 can
use
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computer
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 when they need to translate foreign
languages
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 into
English
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. So, they do not have to study a second
language
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. It takes
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 long time for
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 to learn new
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, if
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precious time.
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 survey conducted by Seoul National University, 70% of the
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computer
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 and they will not study a new
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 in the future.
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 will never have to study a second
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 soon as they will be able to
use
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computer
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 every single day.
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, there is a more important opinion. Some
people
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 a
computer
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 when they need to translate a foreign
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 into
English
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 is because sometimes, a
computer
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 does not work since it is just one of the devices.
From my
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 experience, when I
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Thailand
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to Thailand
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, I used to
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 to translate Thai
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English
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 or Korean.
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, unfortunately, my
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 does not work suddenly at the Hotel where I stayed for a
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. So, I was very embarrassed and could not express my situation to the Hotel managers. If I learned Thai, I could tell them my opinion quickly and easily.
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 indicates that using a
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 translator is not useful all the time and learning new
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 still plays a pivotal role.
To sum up
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,
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 there are some advantages to using a
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 to translate
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, it is evident that
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 of that outweigh
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the benefits
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.

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