You recently organized a party for your company at a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter • describe the party and how it went • explain why you were pleased with the hotel’s service • suggest some improvements that the hotel could make

Dear Sir/Madam My name is Injun Lee; I am writing

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letter to express my appreciation for the well-organised staff party at Emporium hotel. During the party, everybody felt so excited and fascinated

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the view and the well-prepared dishes, which were offered by the hotel chefs. We would like to keep it as an unforgettable memory.

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, we all appreciate that you secured parking spaces for our company staff. We were able to conveniently park our vehicles, right next to the hotel.

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, during the speech, we didn't expect the presents your management team prepared, especially for our employees.

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, the quality

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of service

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and additional cares for our company were significantly excellent for two days.

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, I recommend your executives

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apply

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make some improvements with extra care on utensils and facilities. There was a little bit of stain on

plates

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and the floor was too slippery to dance during the party. Apart from these factors, everything was

alright

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. Yours faithfully, Injun Lee