The line charts give information about the demand for steel and number of workers employed in a country from January to December.

The line charts give information about the demand for steel and number of workers employed in a country from January to December.
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The charts detail
demand
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for steel and the number of workers employed in a given country over a one-year year period. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it is readily apparent that both
demand
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and employment fluctuated but followed similar downward trends. By the end of the period, actual
demand
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had overtaken
production
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. In the first 2 months of the year, workers (6,000), steel
production
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(5,000) and actual
demand
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(3,000) peaked. From there, the number of workers fell steeply to 3,000 in March and was flat through April,
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production
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dropped below 4,000 tonnes and remained stable until July. Actual
demand
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also
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decreased, though it fluctuated between 2 and 3,000 tonnes through September, before plummeting to 0 in November and recovering to 2,000 in December.
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end-of-year pattern was largely mirrored by both
production
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and employment as the former crashed from a second peak of nearly 5,000 in July to under 1,000 by the end of the period (with no recovery). Employment numbers rose to 3,500 in August and had steadily subsided to 1,000 by the end of the year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words demand, production with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Demand
  • Employment
  • Industry
  • Fluctuation
  • Trend
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Correspond
  • External factors
  • Steel industry
  • Workforce
  • Economy
  • Planning
  • Forecast
  • Data Interpretation
  • Monthly Analysis
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