the chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruits and vegetable per day in uk from 2001 to 2008

the chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruits  and vegetable per day in uk from 2001 to 2008
This
bar chart illustrates data about the proportion of women, men and children who were consuming five types of fruits and vegetables every day in the United Kingdom since the year of 2001 to 2008.  
Overall
, women experienced the highest percentage of eating fruits and vegetables
while
youngsters had the lowest.
Also
, there are some notable changes in the consumption of
this
meal.  
Firstly
women's per
cent
started at just over 20% in 2001.
Then
this
number rose significantly in 2006 when it reached its peak of 35 per
cent
.
However
, it did not
last
for long and in 2008 it dropped to 30 per
cent
.   When it comes to men and offspring
it is clear that
the rate remained relatively the same in the first three years, with 17 per
cent
for the former and 13 per
cent
for the latter.
Then
men's consumption rose gradually to a peak of 28 per
cent
in 2006 and 2007. Children experienced an upward trend in 2007 with 27 per
cent
but it dropped in the
last
year to 24 per
cent
.
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