The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes
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The two diagrams illustrate how
cement
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is produced from natural raw materials and the process of concrete manufacture. In general, the
cement
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production visual shows that
cement
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is made of limestone and clay,
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the concrete diagram depicts that concrete is made from
cement
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, sand , gravel and water in certain quantities. To start with
cement
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manufacture , in the first stage , limestone and clay are added in specific amount together into the crusher which grinds the two material to a powder , after that the powder is transferred to the mixer which after mixing deliver the mixture into the rotating heater where external heat is applied.
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the mixture is moved by a conveyer belt into the grinder to grind the lumpy mixture to powder again , the
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stage is the packaging of the
cement
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in bags .Moving on to concrete production , the process simply starts with mixing the four raw materials in certain quantities that are ;
Cement
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15% , Sand 25%, Gravel 50% and water 10% , these materials are added to the mixer to produce concrete.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cement with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • construction
  • cement-making
  • raw materials
  • crushing
  • mixing
  • heating
  • grinding
  • cement powder
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • concrete
  • versatility
  • strength
  • aggregate
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