The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts provide information on the proportion of males and females in
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in 6 broad categories, divided into manual and non-manual
occupations
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. In general, a greater
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of
women
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work
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in non-manual
occupations
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than
work
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in manual
occupations
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, and the reverse is true for
men
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. In the non-manual
occupations
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,
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a greater
percentage
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of working
women
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than
men
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are found in clerical-type positions, there is a smaller
percentage
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of
women
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than
men
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employed in managerial and professional positions. The
percentage
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of
women
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employed in other non-manual
occupations
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is slightly larger than the
percentage
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of
men
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in these
occupations
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. In manual
employment
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, the biggest difference between the two sexes is in the
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of craft workers, where males make up 24% of the workforce and females just 3%.
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, the
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of
women
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working as general
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labourers is very small, only 1%. There is not a great deal of difference between the
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of
men
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doing other forms of manual
work
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(26%) and
women
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in other manual
work
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(27%). In summary, the two charts clearly show that
women
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do not have the same access as
men
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to certain types of
employment
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words employment, occupations, percentage, women, work, men with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 7 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • employment patterns
  • unemployment
  • sector
  • distribution
  • comparison
  • percentage
  • manufacturing
  • services
  • full-time
  • part-time
  • Great Britain
  • demographics
  • workforce
  • labor market
  • 1992
  • data representation
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