The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town.

The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of

 drinking water in an Australian town.
The provided picture illustrates the process of harvesting rainwater in order to produce drinking
water
for society in an Australian town.
Overall
, there are approximately six steps in the process of collecting rainwater, beginning with storing the rain and ending with generating sources of fresh
water
for each of the houses.
Firstly
, rain is caught on the rooftops of houses and runs down through a system of connected drain pipes which lead to a
water
filter. Once the
water
has been filtered, it
then
moves through the pipes to a large storage tank. At the following stage of the process, the
water
must be moved to
water
treatment by another pipe where it is mixed with chemicals to be fresh. Once the
water
has been treated,
then
it is pumped through the structure in each of the accommodations and these residents can utilize
this
water
through their
water
faucets.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rainwater harvesting
  • rooftops
  • drains and gutters
  • underground storage tanks
  • water treatment plant
  • purification
  • filtration
  • chemical treatment
  • impurities
  • microorganisms
  • distribution system
  • potable water
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