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You have lost your credit card Write a letter to the manager of your bank In the letter explain how you lost the card ask the manger to cancel the old card and to issue you a replacement

#credit #card #manager #bank #manger #replacement
Dear sir, My name is Sam. I am writing
this
 letter to inform you that yesterday I have lost my credit
card
 (#123455) during my flight
to
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 Nova Scotia to Toronto. I would like to tell you that I have
$
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10 thousand plus limit on it.
Moreover
, it was an international
card
 and I’m scared that anyone can use it anywhere.
Therefore
, I am requesting you
to
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apply
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cancel it as soon as possible. I am
businessman
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a businessman
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 and often visit
other province
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another province
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 to attend
the
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meeting related to work.
Moreover
, it was essential for me because all the
transaction
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transactions
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 of payment used to go through it.
In addition
 to
this
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 it is inconvenient for me to carry huge cash with me.
Thus
, I request
to
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you to
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 issue me a new
card
, so that I can take advantage of the bank services. If you have any
query
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 please contact me with the phone number or email attached to the
card
. Looking forward to
hear
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 from you soon. Yours sincerely, sam
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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