The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
plan displays the comparison between current
industrial estate of Add an article
the current
the
Norbiton city and how it will Correct article usage
apply
looks
in the future. Change the verb form
look
Overall
, all of the recent factories will be demolished to be constructed for new housings
. The road extension plan Fix the agreement mistake
housing
also
noticeable on the northern and western Add a missing verb
is also
side
. Fix the agreement mistake
sides
Moreover
, there will be several facilities added into
the planned development as well.
It can be seen that eight factories exist in the current industrial area. Change preposition
to
Furthermore
, there is a river in the north and a
wide farmland across it. The road is longing from the east to the west and ended up an around about at the Remove the article
apply
center
of the estate and Change the spelling
centre
then
continue
to the south.
For the planned development, the industrial estate will be totally transformed into a housing residence and the factory buildings will no longer exist. There are seven housings will be built in the area. Correct subject-verb agreement
continues
Besides
, the construction of school
, playground, and medical centre will happen on the eastern Add an article
the school
a school
side
while
the shops will be built in
the western Change preposition
on
side
opposite the medical centre. On the north side
, the road will be extended and passes through the river.Submitted by nurikasetyar on
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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