The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
plan displays the comparison between the current industrial estate of Norbiton city and how it will look in the future.
Overall
, all of the recent factories will be demolished to be constructed for new housing. The road extension plan is
also
noticeable on the northern and western sides.
Moreover
, there will be several facilities added to the planned development as well. It can be seen that eight factories exist in the current industrial area.
Furthermore
, there is a river in the north and wide farmland across it. The road is longing from the east to the west and ended up around about at the centre of the estate and
then
continues to the south. For the planned development, the industrial estate will be totally transformed into a housing residence and the factory buildings will no longer exist. There are seven housings will be built in the area.
Besides
, the construction of the school, playground, and medical centre will happen on the eastern side
while
the shops will be built on the western side opposite the medical centre. On the north side, the road will be extended and passes through the river.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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