The diagrams below show the design for a wind turbine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrate how the
wind
is collected by a turbine
and how the energy is generated, as well as
great locations for these installations.
The wind
turbine
consists of a tower made of steel, upon which a generator is installed. The wind
sensor is connected to the top of the generator which rotates fibreglass or wood blades. The sensor can define how fast the wind
blows and it also
can specify its direction. In addition
to the main construction, there is a computer located in the service room near the machine and with information conducted by a sensor, it can regulate the location of blades.
The wind
turbine
can be installed in three different areas. To get maximum wind
power the turbine
can be installed on a hill or on the top of a mountain. In this
case, it would get a lot of strong wind
flows. The second spot where the machine can be placed is in the water. By placing the tower there, the landscape will not be destroyed, in addition
, wind
flows are not forceful near the coastline, so it leads to less energy output. The last
option is to put in a domestic turbine
. It can be located nearby a house or any other facility, ,
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,however
such
type of turbine
produces much less energy which is 100 kilowatts compared to the regular one with 1.5 megawatts.
So, to maximize the effect of wind
turbines, there should be placed either in the water or on the hills.Submitted by sevrukov.stepan on
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