he first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts illustrate the percentage of
women
and men
who do some kinds
of housework and the amount of Fix the agreement mistake
kind
time
spent in
each task per Change preposition
on
day
by each gender. At first glance, it can clearly be seen that most women
and men
do cooking and spend most of their time
doing it.
First of all, 80% of females cook during
each Change preposition
apply
day
, while
60% of men
cooks. After that, 60% of ladies clean their houses. On the other hand
, 40% of men
clean per day
. According to
pet care, same
percentage of Change the article
the same
men
and women
, which is 20%, spend their day
with their pets. Then
, the percentage of men
doing house repairs reached almost 20% which was significantly higher than women
by approximately 10%.
By far, the average time
of
people doing housework is in Change preposition
apply
minutes
. Interestingly, more than 80 minutes
were spent by women
cooking, but exactly 60 minutes
were spent by men
. Following that, the time
spent in
cleaning by females and males is 70 and 45 Change preposition
apply
minutes
, respectively. Next,
20 minutes
were spent to take
care of pets per Change the verb form
taking
day
by women
and men
.
Lastly
, about 5 minutes
were spent by women
in
house repairs Change preposition
on
otherwise
men
spend more than 15 minutes
doing repairs in house
.Correct article usage
the house
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