Task 1: The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The provided pie chart delineates the portion of

time

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burnt out on separate activities in a single country in 1958 and 2008.

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, working was the most popular of both

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time

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times

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and the least was travel to work. In 1958 working was the highest percentage with 33

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percent

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, and over 50 years it increased slightly by 9

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in 2008.

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, I guess in the past since many workloads so there was a lot of rest

time

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for sleeping, it took 32

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in 1958 but in 2008 the ratio of

time

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for sleeping

was

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decreased sharply by 7

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percent

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. Following that, we had 19

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percent

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with outdoor activities in 1958 and it dropped rapidly it was just about 8

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percent

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apply

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50 years later. It is

sad

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thing for today’s society because they have less

time

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to spend with their families and expand their relationships. After that, we had 13

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percent

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for relaxing at home in 2008 but in the

,

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past we just had 8

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percent

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that apply was a good thing since when they had more

time

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off their health was

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better and work was

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more productive, especially those of the people aged 30 to 39. The final activity

were

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others interests or playing sports which were 6

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percent

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in 1958 and went up slightly by 2

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percent

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over the period.