Your child is going on a trip to a nature reserve organised by a local youth club. The club leader is looking for parents to travel with the group and you will like to go. Write a letter to the leader of the youth club. In your letter Say why you want to go on the trip Describe what you could do to help during the trip Ask for more details about the trip
Dear Mr Thomson,
I am Harvey, living in apartment number 477 on Grand Avenue, London. I am writing to you with regards to showing my interest
to go
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in going
trip
which
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with
children
on 7th April 2023.
First of all, I came to know that the club leader searched for suitable parents who accompanied the children
on the trip
to a nature reserve. I find myself suitable for that opportunity because I knew
that area very well and I Wrong verb form
know
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visited there various times and know the procedure very well.
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that
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children
also
enhance their knowledge by explaining to them about the nature reserve. Along with
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children
becomes a memorizing movement for them.
Finally
, if you find me a suitable partner to manage that trip
please provide some information about the trip
like the total number of children
, timing, how to commute and how many adults go with that group so that I can plan accordingly
. Please let me know if you find any further
information from me. My email ID is [email protected].
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
HarveySubmitted by parvinderp93 on
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task response
Ensure to address all points in the task prompt clearly and provide sufficient details.
coherence and cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate, but attention should be paid to paragraph organization and topic development to improve coherence and cohesion.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite