Write a letter to your manager for a leave request. -Explain why ? -How many days do you need? - When will you join back ?

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Dear Mike, Good day. Hope you are doing well. I would like to bring your notice that I need to apply day-off in next week. As I said, I want to take a leave from next Monday to Thursday

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personal activity, which cannot be postponed indeed and I had an appointment,which is scheduled with a local real estate consultant regarding the sale of my house.

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, I need time off for four days to complete all necessary documentation processes with the agent. So, that I can finish my home sale without any hiccups indeed. I can resume back my work at the office on Friday . So, I can be available during my day off through mail and mobile. So, don't hesitate to call me on my mobile in case of any emergency. I will happliy assit to our collegues. Hope you will consider my request. I would like to hear from you soon. Your's

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, Ravi

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

160 words

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