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Band 5.5

vou left a jacket behind at a restaurant you went to recently. write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter о describe the jacket explain when you visited the restaurant and where you were sitting say want you want the manager to do.

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Dear Sir, I am Harvey, living at 74 Pine Street. I am writing to you with regard to my black colour
jacket
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 which I
forgot
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left
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 in your "The Pizza Boss" restaurant, situated in the city centre. First of all, I
am
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have been
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 your regular customer since 2000. On a weekly ,basis I visited your restaurant. I forgot my black colour
jacket
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 from the woodland brand.
This
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jacket
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 has two pockets
along with
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that
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apply
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a golden zip and buttons on the shoulder. It is a long
jacket
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 and chain on both cuffs. Moving on, on that day I visited there with my friend and we met there to discuss business. We
sitten
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set
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 the fourth table in row number 2.We ordered two drinks and some food. The bill reference number is R73479. Around 6 PM,we left from there after spending one hour.
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, I would really appreciate
you
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it
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 if you favour me by posting that
jacket
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 to my home address. I will pay all the costs in advance. Because at present I am out of station for two months. Please let me know if you require any
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 information. My email id is [email protected]. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Harvey

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task response
Provide more specific details about the jacket, such as the size, material, and any unique identifying features.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure a more natural flow between sentences and paragraphs to improve overall coherence and cohesion.
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