The diagrams below show UK students' responses to the question of to what extent would they describe themselves as financially organized. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Very organised % All students 21 Age up to 22 years 18 Age 23-25 years 26 Age over 26 years 35

The diagrams below show UK students' responses to the question of to what extent would they describe themselves as financially organized.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

                             Very organised %

All students                        21

Age up to 22 years          18

Age 23-25 years                     26

Age over 26 years                  35
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pie chart and tab show the different financial organization of a group of
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under percentage. It goes from "not at all organised" to "very organized" in
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of how much managing the
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have. First of all, in the pie
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the main trend is represented by the "fairly organised" option, which shows a percentage of 53 which is over half. The less value is associated with the "not at all" category with a 4% average; the other two options are nearly the same above 20%.
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, in the other chart, tab one, the
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that gave the "very organised" answer are divided into three categories; another point is the percentage
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. We can see that the organization level is directly proportioned with the age in fact people over 26 years are the most organised,
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of those whose age is under 22 years. In conclusion, we can say that the financial management between
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group of
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is almost well organised, even better in the older ranges of age.
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