You recently sent some documents by post, but they did not arrive at the destination. Write a letter to the post office manager. In your letter, •give details of the situation •describe the documents • say what action you want the post office to take

Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you that a couple of days ago I opted for your courier service to courier my parcel.
However
, it didn’t reach the location mentioned. My name is Harsh Rewari. The parcel reference number is 234GH4. I went on 22nd October to your Oshawa branch near Brampton for the parcel to be delivered to Toronto. It was a blue envelope wrapped with a special bubble wrap and a fragile sign written on it. Documents in the envelope are very important. It had my IELTS results, my college transcripts, and my Indian identification details. These documents if not reached, will stop my permanent residency procedure. I would request you in the most respectful manner to please check the current status of my shipment, and kindly deliver it to the above-mentioned destination through Express delivery as soon as possible. In anticipation of your positive response, I shall remain. Yours sincerely, Harsh Rewari
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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