Behaviour in school is getting worse .Explain the causes and the effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions
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and what to do in near future. Simple homework to do their house and will explain it
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this
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result
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age
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people
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problems
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problem
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our
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the concern
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education
people
are not capable to study due to
financial constraint.
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