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The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given charts illustrate the rate of
males
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 and
females
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 in a nation involved in
house
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 chores (cooking , cleaning,
pet
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 caring and repairing the
house
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),
as well as
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 , the amount of
time
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 each gender spent doing these duties per day .
Overall
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, the number of
females
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 cleaning and cooking is more compared to that of
males
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 ,
additionally
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 ,the
time
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 spent on those particular tasks was higher ,
on the other hand
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 ,
pet
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 caring and
house
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 repairs witnessed a larger percentage of
males
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 , in terms of the
time
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 spent they outnumbered women in only
house
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 repairs . Regarding percentage cooking took the highest share among all for women and men at just over 80 per
cent
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 and 60 per
cent
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 respectively ,
pet
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 care had almost the same percentage in both genders where
females
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 had 20 per
cent
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 and
males
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 had slightly above 20 per
cent
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 . In terms of
time
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pet
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 care saw the same period of
time
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 at approximately 20 minutes for both genders ,
while
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in contrast
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house
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 repair showed a big gap between the two at less than ten minutes for
females
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 and less than 20 for
males
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 .

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Vocabulary: Replace the words males, females, house, pet, time, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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