Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be don about lack of sleep?

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live normally. First of all,
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using electronic devices like
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issues like
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and work has been increasing for 10 years.
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to bed. and, taking a shower in advance is a better way to good sleep.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Insomnia
  • Sleep deprivation
  • Sleep disorders
  • Sleep quality
  • Fatigue
  • Exhaustion
  • Restless
  • Restorative sleep
  • REM sleep
  • Circadian rhythm
  • Sleep hygiene
  • Napping
  • Sleep duration
  • Melatonin
  • Sleep-inducing
  • Drowsiness
  • Sleep disturbances
  • Obstructive sleep apnea
  • Snoring
  • Sleepwalking
  • Sleep talking
  • Shift work
  • Sleeping pills
  • Sleep aid
  • Relaxation techniques
  • Meditation
  • Deep breathing
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