Some countries have legal ages at which people can drink. Other countries believe not have strict laws is a better policy. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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globalization era consuming liquor

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at an alarming rate.

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, it has been controversial, in some

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legal age of drinking but others thought not imposed laws on it. I will discuss both sides of a coin

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elucidate my opinion. On the one hand,there are

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of reasons

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strict laws for drinking

alcohol

.First and foremost

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adolescents lose

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their

mental health when

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drink

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they easily commit

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as well as

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of road accidents almost done by teenagers when they are driving with

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alcohol

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.

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,

alcohol

is detrimental

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youngster's

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health in future it is the main root of cause liver failure, kidney problems and other serious illnesses .

Additionally

,teenagers distract from their future aim in life

due to

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country's development will be affected because today's generation is the future of tomorrow.

On the other hand

, fractions of society believe liquor is the medicine

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stress and anxiety. In

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developing

era

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everyone suffers

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depression

as well as

loneliness

then

alcohol

work as medicine.

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, In brazil government does not impose any

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on drinking they drink as medicine.

Moreover

, sometimes juveniles insist law of

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they take

alcohol

which affects parents and society. In my perspective,imposing

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for drinking good notion

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parents should teach

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their

children about

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of drinking. Government allow less amount alcoholic drinks to minors with

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they cannot lose their mind

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thinking. In the epilogue,it is discerned that both views have

thier

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their

own importance

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strong drinks which harmful

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health should not allow

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minors .