The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 

Write at least 150 words.
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The image illustrates the entire process of how
plastic
bottles are recycled. At
th
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the
first age,
plastic
bottles are thrown out by citizens into garbage containers and
then
delivered by trunks to a recycling centre. In the centre, they are sorted by operators before being compressed into blocks and crushed into fractions by a crusher. After being washed in a water container, the fractions are converted into
plastic
pellets.
The
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next stage, the pellets are heated to form raw material, after which the material
are
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put on
the
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tray and sent to factories, where the end products are made. These newly produced items,
such
as food containers, clothes, pencils and
plastic
bags,
enventually
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eventually
enter into people's daily lives again,
thus
forming a complete circulation of recycling. In summary, the
plastic
bottle recycling process consists of nine steps in total. It starts
from
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recycling the bottles as
rubbishes
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rubbish
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and ends in producing offerings.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Recycling process
  • Disposal
  • Collection
  • Sorting
  • Cleaning
  • Contaminants
  • Recycling center
  • Plastic flakes
  • Melting
  • Re-shaping
  • Raw materials
  • Transformation
  • Repurposing
  • End products
  • Variety
  • Sustainability
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