Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your email Recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn Explain how your firend could learn this sport Suggest that you both learn this sport together

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Dear Jenish, Thanks for your letter. It was great to hear from you. I am really excited to hear that you want to learn a new

sport

and I am happy to advise you on that.

Firstly

, I would recommend Archery

Sport

to you because

this

sport

going to bring concentration to your mind.

This

sport

helps you to maintain your focus on the target.

Additionally

this

game feels you relaxing and therapeutic.

Secondly

, you can learn

this

sport

in two ways. One of the ways is to go to the sports centre and do a training course for two months. Another is that you can arrange equipment on your own and do stuff in your home. I would

also

recommend watching a video of a famous archery person in the Olympics which will help you in training.

Lastly

, I

also

think to learn one of the sports next month.

Therefore

, I would recommend you join the archery

sport

together in a sports centre. What is your opinion on

this

? It will be great fun and a great time for

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goals each other. Hope to hear from you soon. Warmest regards,

Milav

Correct your spelling

Milan

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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