The line graph show of amount of carbon dioxide emissions in 1976 to 2007 in four countries united Kingdom, Sweden Italy and Portugal.

The line graph show of amount of carbon dioxide emissions in 1976 to 2007 in four countries united Kingdom, Sweden Italy and Portugal.
The above line graph indicates the number of gas emissions, specifically carbon dioxide from 1976 until 2007 in four different developed countries. In general, throughout 31 years of monitoring, production of emission in Portugal and Italy were rising.
In contrast
,
Sweden
and
the
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UK's contributions were decreasing.
Overall
, if week looks at the very first result of monitoring, which is in 1976, Portugal was the winner among the other four countries by becoming the least contributor of carbon dioxide. Portugal only had 2 metric
tonnes
and followed by Italy with less than 6 metric
tonnes
. The United Kingdom and
Sweden
are the top two among the other two with more than 8 metric
tonnes
. Over the next 20 years, an unprecedented situation happened for the amount of gas monitored in the UK and
Sweden
. Both countries showed they are able to decline the number to approximately 2 metric
tonnes
.
On the other hand
, worse conditions happened in Portugal and Italy. Looking at the data provided, Portugal and Italy had similar conditions from 1967 to 2007 where emissions were rising by almost 2 metric
tonnes
.
However
,
Sweden
and the UK showed ,unlike circumstances with a shrinking quantity of carbon dioxide.
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