The chart gives information about how much energy of different categories produced in France over the period of 5 years.
The chart gives information about how much energy from different categories was produced in France over the period of 5 years.
Overall
, it is noticeable that Petro
had a decline while
the opposite was true for other categories. Additionally
, Gas, Coal and Petro
produced by far the highest.
In the first year, the amount of Coal was the highest proportion, at 29.80% whilst the percentage of Gas and Petro
had slightly lower, at 29,63 and 29.27%. By contrast
, the rate of Nuclear production was only 6.40% of the total energy production.
Over the period of 5 years, Coal production had a slight rise and reached a
highest point at 30.93% and the figure for Gas was a slight decrease to 30.31%. Change the article
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Whereas
the amount of energy Petro
produced a significant fall, approximately 10% and decreased to 19.55%. The figure for Nuclear and other types had a remarkable rise, at 10,10% and 9.10%.Submitted by joyce.ta213 on
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