The chart gives information about how much energy of different categories produced in France over the period of 5 years.

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The chart gives information about how much energy from different categories was produced in France over the period of 5 years.

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, it is noticeable that

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had a decline

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the opposite was true for other categories.

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, Gas, Coal and

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produced by far the highest. In the first year, the amount of Coal was the highest proportion, at 29.80% whilst the percentage of Gas and

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had slightly lower, at 29,63 and 29.27%.

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, the rate of Nuclear production was only 6.40% of the total energy production. Over the period of 5 years, Coal production had a slight rise and reached

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highest point at 30.93% and the figure for Gas was a slight decrease to 30.31%.

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the amount of energy

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produced a significant fall, approximately 10% and decreased to 19.55%. The figure for Nuclear and other types had a remarkable rise, at 10,10% and 9.10%.

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The chart gives information about how much energy of different categories produced in France over the period of 5 years.

6. International tourism has led to an huge increase in the number of visitors to many historical sites around the world. To what extent is this a positive or negative phenomenon?

The rapid advancement of technology has significantly transformed various aspects of our lives. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this technological progress, and how can individuals and societies adapt to these changes?

Some people believe that the experience children have before they go to school will have the greatest effect on their future life. Others argue that experiences gained when they are teenagers have a bigger influence. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?