The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The bar chart compares and contrasts the number of

people

who joined

in

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different

modules

in

a educational institutions

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educational institutions

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.

Whereas

, the pie chart illustrates the proportion of five different aged grouped

people

in

a

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each

modules

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.

Overall

, women were more interested in attending evening

modules

compared to men .

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,

the

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most amount of

people

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the people

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in each

courses

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were the oldest ones and the least

we're

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the youngest.

To begin

with , language accounted

most

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for most

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women

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women's

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attendance

compared to other

modules

, which was 40% .

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,

men

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men's

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attendance

ratio

on

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that section was two times lower than

women

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women's

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(20%) . Meanwhile ,

painting

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was the favourite course for most

men's

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men

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, and it accounted

25

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%.

However

, for females , it was still higher than

males

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for males

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, which was 30%.

While

,

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drama accounted 10%and 20%

attendance

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of attendance

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rating

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ratings

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respectively.

By contrast

, the least proportion joining rating for sculpture, and

it

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was 10% and 30% respectively.

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,

oldest

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people

were the most common candidate in every module and they constituted 45% of

participants

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the participants

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. Meanwhile , 26% of

attendance

in each

courses

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course

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was from 40 to 49 aged grouped

people

.

While

11% and 16% of

attendance

come

for

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from

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adult groups .

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,

least

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the least

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candidate for each

modules

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was

from

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youngsters , which was 5%.