The bar chart compares and contrasts the number of
people
who joined Use synonyms
in
different Change preposition
apply
modules
in Use synonyms
a educational institutions
. Correct the article-noun agreement
educational institutions
an educational institution
Whereas
, the pie chart illustrates the proportion of five different aged grouped Linking Words
people
in Use synonyms
a
each Remove the article
apply
Use synonyms
modules
.
Change to a singular noun
module
Overall
, women were more interested in attending evening Linking Words
modules
compared to men . Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Linking Words
the
most amount of Correct article usage
apply
Use synonyms
people
in each Correct article usage
the people
courses
were the oldest ones and the least Change to a singular noun
course
we're
the youngest.
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we were
To begin
with , language accounted Linking Words
most
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for most
women
Change noun form
women's
attendance
compared to other Use synonyms
modules
, which was 40% . Use synonyms
Whereas
, Linking Words
men
Change noun form
men's
attendance
ratio Use synonyms
on
that section was two times lower than Change preposition
in
women
(20%) . Meanwhile , Change noun form
women's
painting
was the favourite course for most Add an article
the painting
men's
, and it accounted Change noun form
men
25
%. Change preposition
for 25
However
, for females , it was still higher than Linking Words
males
, which was 30%. Change preposition
for males
While
Linking Words
,
drama accounted 10%and 20% Remove the comma
apply
Use synonyms
attendance
Change preposition
of attendance
rating
respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
ratings
By contrast
, the least proportion joining rating for sculpture, and Linking Words
it
was 10% and 30% respectively.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
On the other hand
, Linking Words
oldest
Correct article usage
the oldest
people
were the most common candidate in every module and they constituted 45% of Use synonyms
participants
. Meanwhile , 26% of Correct article usage
the participants
attendance
in each Use synonyms
courses
was from 40 to 49 aged grouped Change to a singular noun
course
people
. Use synonyms
While
11% and 16% of Linking Words
attendance
come Use synonyms
for
adult groups . Change preposition
from
However
, Linking Words
least
candidate for each Correct article usage
the least
Use synonyms
modules
was Change to a singular noun
module
from
youngsters , which was 5%.Change preposition
apply
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